Selasa, 26 Maret 2019

Ichsan Jazzawi MHTA


The negative impact of bullying for children in the future.


Believe it or not, a simple problem whatsoever if it is not taken seriously it will give a tremendous impact. Bullying is one of the problems. Bullying is a form of activity that acts of violence perpetrated by a single person or group to deliberately and repeatedly aimed to hurt, humiliate and dropping the esteem of others. However, who would have thought the bullying had 3 negative impact on the future will be a child, Horrible is not it?

First, children are exposed to bullying can suffer from emotional disorders and behavior problems in the future. According, Walgiato (2010: 10) as well as the behavior of a person's emotions can be formed out of the habit of what to do and is found in everyday life. Based on the above opinion, bullying will indirectly affect the nature of the victim's emotions and behavior. Then bullying is very dangerous, especially if the victim bullied repeatedly and gradually this will have a considerable impact on the victim psychologically so would harm the elderly and children in the future.

Second, bullying also can inhibit a child to actualize themselves and this occurs because of the intimidation of the victim thus creating inconvenience in learning activities. It began to affect the way of thinking, and academic achievement. Then the victims are no longer able to participate in learning that makes the victim unable to actualize themselves. It is very dangerous for the future of the child.

Lastly, the bully victim can also suffer physical record. This is very dangerous and implications for the future of children. This form of repression carried out directly from the perpetrator to the victim without any intermediary. This act would result in physical pain to the victim, for example: hitting, kicking and so forth. Of course, victims of bullying who are disabled will greatly impact the future of the child.

Based on the above points, it can be concluded that bullying is very dangerous to the future of the child. Bullying can lead to a lack of knowledge and make the victim being stupid. Therefore, children should be free from bullying so the future is not threatened.

7 komentar:

  1. it's true because bully has a lot of negative effects.

    BalasHapus
  2. Your essay has no data. You should include data in each statement so that information is more accurate.

    BalasHapus
  3. Hi, I see your essay only paragraph one use data. Why the others paragraph without data?

    BalasHapus
  4. I think you need to add data to strengthen your argument

    BalasHapus
  5. Hi, Ichsan. In your thesis statement, you said there are 3 negative impact of bullying for children. you better mention it so your thesis statement look clear. also, i don't find any data from your supporting paragraph

    BalasHapus
  6. you did not mention those impacts in thesis statement(?)

    BalasHapus