The Causes of Bullying
Bullying is not a new thing in this
modern era. Bullying happens to somebody with any reasons that sometimes with
undescribed reasons. According to Monks et al., (2009), “Bullying can happen in
various contexts, in childhood or adult life”. No matter what, someone
shouldn’t get bullying just because something that wasn’t supposed to be the
reason it happened.
In many cases, someone gets bully
because of disabilities, and these cases could happen to children or adult. Bullying
because of disabilities happens more often to children and they get bully from
the nearest people, such as other students in the school or other children near
their house. Based on a survey in Northern
Ireland by RSM McClure Watters (2001), “Bully cases because of disabilities
often happens to children in primary or post-primary school”. Actually, rather
than bullying disabilities person, others with a normal physique should support
or take care and help them to get the same treatment as others.
Disabilities, not the only reason
bullying happens to someone, physique also could be the other reason for
bullying cases happens. Physique bullying not only because someone is too fat,
but sometimes it’s also because someone has a thin body. Based on research entitled
"The causes of bullying: results from the National Survey Health (PeNSE)”
showed that bullying was more recurrent between someone were either have too
fat or too thin body image.
For some case, children with a genetic
predisposition or sometimes also called genetic susceptibility has higher
possibilities to make bullying happens. Research entitled "Cause of
Bullying in Boarding High School in Zimbabwe", shown that genetic
predisposition is one of several factors that contribute to bullying behaviors.
Tatum (1993) has suggested, children with a genetic predisposition to bullying
may have a possibility for bullying lowered through the provision of the
boarding school environment in which relations between students are positive.
Lastly, bullying cases could happen to
anyone, anywhere and anytime with some reason from others that did not have empathy.
Disabilities, too fat or too thin, physique or genetic predisposition should
not be a reason for bullying. As a human, we should respect them and show our empathy
with treating them like we treat others who have the normal condition, and also
help them when they fell down because they’re not confident with their self.
Support is something what they really need from others and let’s help them to
avoid bullying.
I think human has damage bullying must giving respect and confident.
BalasHapusHii ratih , I see in your title "cause" but in your essay I see you only focus on "cases".
BalasHapushi Ratih! better if you give main idea in introduction, so that the readers can focus to read your essay.
BalasHapusHi Ratih, it looks like your thesis statement isn't clear. you better mention it more specific about what causes of bullying you will explain in your supporting paragraph
BalasHapusHi sist. I think your essay is too broad and not detailed. You don't convey your idea to a specific issue.
BalasHapusi think your essay disconnected with tittle. you explain about cases in bullying. so, what the conclusion in your essay?
BalasHapus